Wednesday, 15 September 2021

Cross Country

My mum drove me to school. We walked over to the cross country the teachers said "that year 6 girls will go first" the year 6s lined up in a line "GO!" koka sue said I ran then I tripped up I got up it was a little embarrassing but I was fine. I ran again I wasn't that fast so I just ran with Dillyn and Millie. We got to the sand bit I walked that it was to hard ( for me) to run up. I ran passed Dillyn and Millie I just finished my first lap when I did Charlotte just came first.

When I was running my second lap I saw my Mum running to! I ran up to her and gave her a hug someone was crying so my Mum asked what was wrong she said she couldn't do it she walked back with her friend. I ran to the yellow poles I hated it when people were cheering me on.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Amber, I loved how you said all your feelings that happened inside. Also I think you mean pass not passed. Aria

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  2. Hi Amber,
    I really love your blog post.
    What was your favorite part about Cross Country?
    thats funny you fell over but you got right back up good job!
    I think you could have worked on say (Pass) not (Passed)
    Besides that you did really well!
    Great job Amber!
    Alivia

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